We need to talk about where you are and what pieces you are submitting. Start a concentration page with all of your pieces together so you can see how they relate visually. You should have 8 breadths and 3 concentrations by Thursday. You have to decide which pieces you are submitting so come see me for help or put this together by Thursday. Thanks Lauren!
The girl in the tree needs some editing but is very evocative. Is that a person in the background? If it is and it's not part of the piece we need to remove it. Plus as of right now we don't know where to look exactly. A filter would help us zero in on her (make her come forward and the background recede) or play with shadows to emphasize her more. The second piece with the two faces is very good. Are you submitting them instead of or along with the same two girls at the picnic. That would be fine, I just need to know. Creating a concentration page by Friday will help me (and you)know how this is looking all together.
I am so sorry I forgot to come after my exams ! Ok I will work on the concentration page...alongside Also, the girl in the tree does need editing, yet I do not have photoshop (or even the skills to work it) so I have to wait until school begins.
We need to talk about where you are and what pieces you are submitting. Start a concentration page with all of your pieces together so you can see how they relate visually. You should have 8 breadths and 3 concentrations by Thursday. You have to decide which pieces you are submitting so come see me for help or put this together by Thursday. Thanks Lauren!
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ReplyDeleteI need to know exactly which pieces I am grading, in other words.
ReplyDeleteThe girl in the tree needs some editing but is very evocative. Is that a person in the background? If it is and it's not part of the piece we need to remove it. Plus as of right now we don't know where to look exactly. A filter would help us zero in on her (make her come forward and the background recede) or play with shadows to emphasize her more.
ReplyDeleteThe second piece with the two faces is very good. Are you submitting them instead of or along with the same two girls at the picnic. That would be fine, I just need to know. Creating a concentration page by Friday will help me (and you)know how this is looking all together.
I am so sorry I forgot to come after my exams ! Ok I will work on the concentration page...alongside
ReplyDeleteAlso, the girl in the tree does need editing, yet I do not have photoshop (or even the skills to work it) so I have to wait until school begins.